For those of you who liked my Astrology comic (see
here), I've made SEVEN MORE PAGES of ROMANCE, DARKNESS, and RAW EMOTION. You can start reading it
here at deviantArt, but since you're all so great, I'm posting it here too.
And so, dear friends, we enter this haunting tale. Prepare to love, hate, and above all, weep.
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:27:38 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Suddenly Masahiro was standing at the head of the Titan Ultima, the deadliest space warship in the galaxy
[10:27:53 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "So Chancellor Fandangox wants a duel, huh"
[10:28:09 PM] David Iorio: hey not fair why am I the cancellor
[10:28:10 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Against the starlit sky, Masahiro flipped his hair
[10:28:20 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: and looked at the camera
[10:28:25 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "Well"
[10:28:28 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: he crooned
[10:28:33 PM] David Iorio: swoon
[10:28:34 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "I'll give him"
[10:28:39 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: *muscle flex*
[10:28:42 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "a duel"
[10:28:50 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: *explosion in background*
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:29:06 PM] David Iorio: The starship couldn't handle all this MANpower
[10:29:23 PM] David Iorio: The starship manpower handler then thus got overLOADED
[10:29:27 PM] David Iorio: swoon
[10:29:38 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "Mayday captain!"
[10:29:40 PM] David Iorio: everybody on the ship was on a raging state of flux
[10:29:53 PM] David Iorio: as they ran towards the safe capsules
[10:29:58 PM] David Iorio: knowing all too well it was too late
[10:30:00 PM] David Iorio: but running
[10:30:02 PM] David Iorio: CLINGING
[10:30:05 PM] David Iorio: to that false hope.
[10:30:08 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: The alarms blared, and people were screaming
[10:30:41 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: a few tripped, and were stamped out by the mob
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:30:54 PM] David Iorio: Their screams were ignored, however.
[10:31:03 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: No one could hear their bones breaking, amidst the chaos
[10:31:18 PM] David Iorio: No one but Peter.
[10:31:21 PM] David Iorio: Because he
[10:31:25 PM] David Iorio: had taken the candybar.
[10:31:38 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: from the cold, dead grip of his father
[10:31:49 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: reduced to nothing but a mangled corpse
[10:32:08 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "Father", he sobbed through a mouthful of delicious chocolate
[10:32:14 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "Whyyyyy"
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:32:18 PM] David Iorio: His father
[10:32:25 PM] David Iorio: using his last breath
[10:32:32 PM] David Iorio: whispered to his son.
[10:32:36 PM] David Iorio: "Come closer"
[10:32:45 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: And Peter leaned in
[10:32:57 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: , one hand to his ear, the other firmly gripping the candy
[10:33:07 PM] David Iorio: "I have to tell you something" That's what Peter heard his father say
[10:33:33 PM] David Iorio: "You are Ado-" Peter strangely silenced his own father.
[10:33:40 PM] David Iorio: For reasons yet unknown as of today.
[10:34:11 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Rumor has it that Peter
[10:34:35 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: mouth smeared with sweet chocolatey gunk
[10:35:05 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: stood up and walked away from his father's struggling body
[10:35:11 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: away from the shame
[10:35:14 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: the pain
[10:35:16 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: the guilt
[10:35:31 PM] David Iorio: the chocolate wrap.
[10:35:34 PM] David Iorio: he left all behind.
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:35:42 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: He walked away from the safety pods
[10:35:44 PM] David Iorio: never looking back
[10:35:49 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: to the control room
[10:35:58 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: knowing his fate
[10:36:08 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "Attention passengers"
[10:36:15 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Peter's voice blared out through the speakers
[10:36:26 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "You can still be saved"
[10:37:04 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: In thoughtful silence, Peter traced his finger over the controls
[10:37:18 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "This ship will explode in one minute"
[10:37:36 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "If one person can stay in the control room
[10:37:55 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "And control the manliness handlers
[10:38:14 PM] David Iorio: "Then"
[10:38:19 PM] David Iorio: "Only then..."
[10:38:23 PM] David Iorio: "there will be hope"
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:38:34 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Peter swallowed what was left of the candy
[10:38:42 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: and rubbed a tear from his cheek
[10:39:11 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "I have one thing left to say"
[10:39:14 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "Father...
[10:39:20 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "You...
[10:39:45 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: He broke off, choked with emotion and chocolate residue
[10:39:49 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: "You're adopted"
Quote (originally posted by
Watermelon Kirby):
[10:39:55 PM] Stevennnn: Adblock shows you cats instead of ads! Learn more
[10:40:07 PM] David Iorio: wow megnteru rude
[10:40:08 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: aothbatjoeh
[10:40:09 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: magnatoon
[10:40:11 PM] David Iorio: we are writing ART here
[10:40:12 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: we're in the middle
[10:40:15 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: of something
[10:40:16 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: VERY EMOTIONAL
[10:40:18 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: and PERSONAL
[10:40:19 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: to me
[10:40:21 PM] David Iorio: VERY PERSONAL
[10:40:21 PM] David Iorio: ok
[10:40:31 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: okay
[10:40:40 PM] David Iorio: too late, we have to start all over again
[10:40:42 PM] David Iorio: because SOMEONE
[10:40:44 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Welp
[10:40:47 PM] David Iorio: ruined everything
[10:40:52 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Looks like
[10:40:55 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: ALL OUR HARD WORK
[10:40:57 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: has gone to waste
[10:41:04 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: and we will NEVER KNOW
[10:41:04 PM] David Iorio: like that chocolate bar.
[10:41:08 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: what happened to PETER
[10:41:17 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: WHO BY THE WAY
[10:41:20 PM] Stevennnn: (sun)
[10:41:21 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: stayed behind
[10:41:23 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: and DIED
[10:41:30 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: in a HORRIBLE EXPLOSION
[10:41:35 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: as the REST OF THE PASSENGERS
[10:41:38 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: escaped to SAFETY
[10:41:52 PM] David Iorio: They spread his tale across al the cosmos.
[10:42:05 PM] David Iorio: Everyone knew the name Peter.
[10:42:14 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: And so Peter was immortalized in the archives of history
[10:42:17 PM] David Iorio: Never shall he be forgottten.
[10:42:25 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: Forever shall he live on
[10:42:27 PM] Masahiro Sakuraitoro: in our hearts
THE END