#1661 9:33 AM Jul 5 2010 2010
Octane He is Entertainer!! Joined: Jul 2008	I changed it a up a little. I like the cream tone a lot more than the white. I need to slightly adjust the lighting and render out a bigger picture with alpha mask. Then I might possibly upload to PR so people can use it. I'm gonna start working on a new one.  Edit: After some more adjustments I got this. I liked the subtleness of the other lighting, but I got the direction about how I wanted it here. Last edited by Octane, 10:03 AM on Jul 05, 2010

#1662 3:57 PM Jul 5 2010 2010
Revenant Certified BAMF Joined: May 2008	Quote (originally posted by Octane): I changed it a up a little. I like the cream tone a lot more than the white. I need to slightly adjust the lighting and render out a bigger picture with alpha mask. Then I might possibly upload to PR so people can use it. I'm gonna start working on a new one.  Edit: After some more adjustments I got this. I liked the subtleness of the other lighting, but I got the direction about how I wanted it here. I really enjoy the soft lighting in the first version here, but the second version's sharpness and reflections are also very nice. Personally I prefer the first version. If you could make a hybrid of the two including the great reflections on the maroon parts from the second version, and the delicate softness of the first one, then it would be perfect. Oh, and I've to ask, why the number '2.8'?

#1663 6:54 PM Jul 5 2010 2010
Octane He is Entertainer!! Joined: Jul 2008	2.8 is just a number. I don't know if this is better.

#1664 8:31 PM Jul 5 2010 2010
Hichez Signature Artist Joined: Jun 2008	I told you you should have used 6.9 just for the laughs. lol.

#1665 10:07 PM Jul 5 2010 2010
Zolga Space Cowboy Joined: Aug 2008	Quote (originally posted by Octane): 2.8 is just a number. I don't know if this is better. I love the lightning bro. The only things that bug me are the 8 in the bottom left next to the tiny 2.8 and the shade of maroon. I honestly would prefer it a bit lighter. Other than that this baby looks good. Randomly saw someone with a tag like this on a graphics forum I lurk. After some searching I found the tutorial it spawned from. I love my color choices but I'm prepared to be ripped to shreds. (LOL, the border sucks. I just felt it needed one.)

#1666 11:40 PM Jul 5 2010 2010
Octane He is Entertainer!! Joined: Jul 2008	Is this the one you're talking about? The essence is fairly similar. http://planetrenders.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=247579 I love the magenta, but the orange is meh. The pencil lines could use better form. The overall execution is a tad bit sloppy, though, honestly, not too bad.

#1667 2:08 AM Jul 6 2010 2010
Doro McOro Welcome to Earth Joined: Apr 2009	I notice the exact thing Octane, lol.

#1668 11:36 PM Jul 11 2010 2010
ColdDegree War is Over Joined: Mar 2009	wow been awhile since i visit the art district

#1669 1:20 AM Jul 12 2010 2010
Octane He is Entertainer!! Joined: Jul 2008	Really, not too bad. I can see improvement. Although, it's very dark. Try adjusting/calibrating your monitor.

#1670 1:29 AM Jul 12 2010 2010
Revenant Certified BAMF Joined: May 2008	Work on facial proportion. Otherwise good work.

#1671 1:29 AM Jul 12 2010 2010
Revenant Certified BAMF Joined: May 2008	Quote (originally posted by Zolga): I love the lightning bro. The only things that bug me are the 8 in the bottom left next to the tiny 2.8 and the shade of maroon. I honestly would prefer it a bit lighter. Other than that this baby looks good. Randomly saw someone with a tag like this on a graphics forum I lurk. After some searching I found the tutorial it spawned from. I love my color choices but I'm prepared to be ripped to shreds. (LOL, the border sucks. I just felt it needed one.) I wanted to do this tutorial a while back.

#1672 1:30 AM Jul 12 2010 2010
Revenant Certified BAMF Joined: May 2008	Quote (originally posted by Octane): 2.8 is just a number. I don't know if this is better. I like this one the most.

#1673 5:27 PM Jul 15 2010 2010
ColdDegree War is Over Joined: Mar 2009	just finished this one

#1674 5:58 PM Jul 15 2010 2010
Octane He is Entertainer!! Joined: Jul 2008	Once again, it's really not too bad. Something about the nose makes me feel really uncomfortable. It's the angle, I think. Overall things just need some more definition. Perhaps some more detail and maybe some shadows underneath the hair. I'm sure your aware of it, but the hair is pretty blotchy around the edges.

#1675 7:47 PM Jul 15 2010 2010
ColdDegree War is Over Joined: Mar 2009	I added a bit more detail to the hair and fixed the blotchy parts. i added faint blemishes to his skin, i tried my best to add shadow from the hair, and i dont see anything wrong with the nose @__@

#1676 11:16 PM Jul 15 2010 2010
xXZCXx Broken Ladder Joined: May 2008	Quote (originally posted by ColdDegree): I added a bit more detail to the hair and fixed the blotchy parts. i added faint blemishes to his skin, i tried my best to add shadow from the hair, and i dont see anything wrong with the nose @__@ Its not the nose, but i see what he meant. His right eye-brow isn't arched enough and his lips and chin are too far forward coupled with the weird lip angle. These aren't really far off at all, but the subtle differences give the middle of the face "weird-nose-look", that was mentioned.

#1677 10:41 AM Jul 16 2010 2010
ColdDegree War is Over Joined: Mar 2009	wait what do you mean with lips and chin???? @___@ im confused

#1678 10:48 AM Jul 16 2010 2010
Octane He is Entertainer!! Joined: Jul 2008	Yeah, I think that's it. The lip should be rotated clockwise by maybe 10 degrees and the chin definitely looks like it's pressed forward. Some shading should fix that, I think.

#1679 11:30 AM Jul 16 2010 2010
ColdDegree War is Over Joined: Mar 2009	i fixed both his eyebrows, rotated his left eye. I enlarged and rotated his lips slightly. and reconstructed his chin a little.

#1680 11:23 AM Jul 19 2010 2010
penguin88 Addicted to Wifi Joined: Aug 2009	Notext Text I was just wanting some input on this one. I thought it turned out pretty nice, but I like the notext one better.

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