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#441
3:17 PM Dec 8 2008 2008
xXZCXx
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N1CE! for making the background reminda me of one of my sigs. Text kinda dulls it though.
#442
5:07 PM Dec 8 2008 2008
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thats awesome i love all the little circles in the background...are those vector brushes? awesome colors
Can i ask how did you put that light shine thing in the upper center
#443
9:24 PM Dec 8 2008 2008
Zaiga
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I really like your signature, it's easy on the eyes but it's also detailed. I also like how Wario stands out the most compared to everything else.

Could someone take a look at my signature too?

Last edited by Zaiga, 7:28 PM on Dec 12, 2008
#444
12:08 AM Dec 9 2008 2008
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Thanks guys.

Zaiga, I love the movement! : )
Good use of line quality, it really makes it feel like Luigi is running, and it helps to fill the right side of the image. I also like the color in the background on the left hand side.

The only problem is that the lines end abruptly on the right side, and that the color is pretty much gone by then. Somehow it doesn't seem to matter on the left side (I think it's the use of color), but on the right side, it stands out. I think it's because the background color on the forums is white, and that's the color in your sig right up at the edge, so it looks like an abrupt end to lines that should keep going even though they can't. Maybe it'd look better on a forum with a colored background. I don't know.

Still, I really like it.

*Edit*
Actually, I just noticed that some of the lines on the left hand side are on top of Luigi (where they get really thin).  It somewhat interrupts his shape by cutting through it.  Put that on a layer behind to fix it.
*End edit*
Last edited by TheRealBobMan, 1:09 AM on Dec 09, 2008
#445
3:35 PM Dec 9 2008 2008
xXZCXx
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Quote (originally posted by CinatoastB3):
thats awesome i love all the little circles in the background...are those vector brushes? awesome colors
Can i ask how did you put that light shine thing in the upper center


well actually i already got cnc it was a mistake to put it back up lol but thanx ne ways
yeah its vector brushes clipping masks etc... and like a tryed to help you with earlier use soft round brushes with low opacity to get lighting effects whever you want

EDIT~ took out sig
Last edited by xXZCXx, 3:36 PM on Dec 09, 2008
#446
5:50 PM Dec 9 2008 2008
Zaiga
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Quote (originally posted by TheRealBobMan):
Thanks guys.

Zaiga, I love the movement! : )
Good use of line quality, it really makes it feel like Luigi is running, and it helps to fill the right side of the image. I also like the color in the background on the left hand side.

The only problem is that the lines end abruptly on the right side, and that the color is pretty much gone by then. Somehow it doesn't seem to matter on the left side (I think it's the use of color), but on the right side, it stands out. I think it's because the background color on the forums is white, and that's the color in your sig right up at the edge, so it looks like an abrupt end to lines that should keep going even though they can't. Maybe it'd look better on a forum with a colored background. I don't know.

Still, I really like it.

*Edit*
Actually, I just noticed that some of the lines on the left hand side are on top of Luigi (where they get really thin).  It somewhat interrupts his shape by cutting through it.  Put that on a layer behind to fix it.
*End edit*


Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I also noticed that the lines cut through Luigi, but I only saw it after I was done -_-. I'll also try and add some color on the right side.
Last edited by Zaiga, 7:29 PM on Dec 12, 2008
#447
6:13 PM Dec 9 2008 2008
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When you add the color on the right side, try not to darken it too much, or the lighting on Luigi will need fixing (the highlights on his face work nicely with the brightness on the left side that comes from it being white).

If you don't like the way it turns out, you can try to thin out and fade the lines near the right edge, but I don't know if it'll look as good if you do that. It might take away from the sense of movement, and you don't want to do that because it's one of the strong points in your sig.

Keep it up. You're getting good really quick. : )
#448
6:43 PM Dec 9 2008 2008
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what is the name of soft round brushes? and is there one for gimp?
#449
6:43 PM Dec 9 2008 2008
Zaiga
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Okay, I changed some of it, I hope it's better than the other one. =)

Last edited by Zaiga, 7:29 PM on Dec 12, 2008
#450
11:45 PM Dec 9 2008 2008
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i like the smudged copy of the luigi render for the BG, but i think you should have kept the line idea, try adding a border to get rid of the look of abruptness, otherwise the only think i could think of is possibly putting the stretched luigi on a lower opacity good work
#451
12:57 PM Dec 10 2008 2008
xXZCXx
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Quote (originally posted by CinatoastB3):
what is the name of soft round brushes? and is there one for gimp?

well you can use the default brushes... its the one that looks dark in the center and fades out word.... just use white or black coloring with it and mess with the opacity in the brush

{EDIT}took out sig again ;L
Last edited by xXZCXx, 12:57 PM on Dec 10, 2008
#452
6:00 PM Dec 10 2008 2008
Zaiga
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Quote (originally posted by Hickey11):
i like the smudged copy of the luigi render for the BG, but i think you should have kept the line idea, try adding a border to get rid of the look of abruptness, otherwise the only think i could think of is possibly putting the stretched luigi on a lower opacity good work


Which line idea are you talking about? The one that was on the top right side? 
Last edited by Zaiga, 7:29 PM on Dec 12, 2008
#453
10:35 PM Dec 10 2008 2008
Hickey11
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Quote (originally posted by Zaiga):
Which line idea are you talking about? The one that was on the top right side? 

the one you had in the first version with the smudged lines 
Last edited by Hickey11, 10:36 PM on Dec 10, 2008
#454
3:06 PM Dec 11 2008 2008
lordunicorn3
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zaiga
its ok, i like the idea, the smuged version is better, but you could have kept the lines.  The text needs some work, it seems out of place, and its kind of empty


ok, this is like my first tag in like 2 months, and i think its my best so far

#455
3:42 PM Dec 11 2008 2008
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lordunicorn3

I like it.
Everything seems to flow well, the only thing negative I can find is the balance. The left side is very busy what with the text and flame, while the right is completely empty behind Charmander. Overall it's still nice to look at.

here's one I just completed.

I think it may be in my sig so it might appear twice, sorry.



Edit: My first sig ever btw.
Last edited by Revenant, 3:02 PM on Dec 12, 2008
#456
9:44 PM Dec 11 2008 2008
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Lordunicorn3, I love the cartoonis flames on top of the realistic looking ones. : )

Revenant, I like the flow in your sig, but I think Falco could use a little work around the edges. Other than that, I think it's pretty good, though you might want to change the font. I haven't studied typography yet, but a font like that doesn't seem to fit the "bad-***ness" of a name like Revenant.
Also, you might want to adjust the size so it wont cut off the bottom.
#457
12:39 AM Dec 12 2008 2008
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Here I revamped it, it was hard to find another suitable font let me know what you think.
#458
12:49 AM Dec 12 2008 2008
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I think the new font looks better. : )
Also, the edges do look much cleaner. Good job. I really like this.
#459
2:01 AM Dec 12 2008 2008
automatic
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I hope I can get some feedback on my stuff since I'm new to sig making.

heres the first one i made
 


second


third (i was reading manga that day lol)


im aware its not great stuff so any feedback is greatly appreciated. I have two more sigs but ill post them in another post since i dont want to take up a lot of space (i did post 3 sigs) 

Edit: These were requests (yeah I know) from people I know from tournaments.
Last edited by automatic, 2:13 AM on Dec 12, 2008
#460
11:42 AM Dec 12 2008 2008
Revenant
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mario lolXD

They're all nice... I like them.

The first one needs a little bit more action, maybe adding another render or C4D on the right can solve this problem.

The second one is awesome, but feels like it could be a little more grungy... I think so at least. maybe a grunge-like filter over the floral that's fading away.

The third is the best in my opinion. I think the requester's name (Rawr) should have been a different font. Also the text on the right would have looked bad-*** if it had started to fade away once it passed Shiek. The only REAL problem is that my eyes can't find a resting place, there is just too much -clear- text.
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